Here is the sixth page in my ongoing saga. On this page I began to be more aware of the element of timing. I have a lot to learn about this art, I think if I would script out and do of thumbnails the whole book beforehand that way I could have a better overall feel of the floe of the story.
Looks great! lettering works and all that. Yes, it does seem obvious that planning out the whole thing would be helpful. It is amazing that you can do it without planning. It would certainly save you from needing to do massive editing at the end for clarity.
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